The essay should consider what is meant by equal citizenship. Your essay should also include a consideration of the universal, and group- differentiated models of citizenship. You might, for example, argue in favour of one or the other models of citizenship
I noticed that it is a little bit choppy, and by this I mean that in the first 3 paragraphs, the sentences were not in sync. Each sentence described something different and the next sentence jumped into something new. I’m trying to find the right words to describe what I mean. Overall, the essay is good but I’d appreciate if you could read through it once or twice to try to understand what I mean.
Just a suggestion: Conjunctions might help in some places instead of periods
try to paraphrase and add some of your own words to the extisting text
see the attached written paper and instructions