I’m working on a english writing question and need support to help me study.

Hi there, I need help rewriting/editing my rough draft for my English paper. If you could add more details to my not so good paper as well as commentary and little opinion that would be great. I would appreciate it if it was between 550-700 words. The article talks about how human beings have ruined the wilderness by being addicted to civilization and how in a thousand years civilization will completely take over. I already wrote where I stand I would just like to elevate the essay and be better written.

Thank you:)